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Glancing down at a silvery blade,
Tempted to feel how well it's made.
A simple draw across the surface
To quench a particular thirst...
Inside crying out for what was lost
One's pain going to give at the cost.
Silent rivers travel down,
To an orface shaped in a frown.
All has abandonned one's heart,
Thanks to being torn apart.
A calm air washes the victim,
As the red liquid falls from the limb.

~Ryshili
12-22-06 [8:07pm]
©2007-2009 ~Ryshili
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Author's Comments

I decided to put up something other than a drawing or a photo, so I put up one of my short poems.

I think the idea is very clear on what it's trying to relay.

Instead of giving into my malignant addiction I've had all my life,.. I wrote about it instead. And surprisingly, I didn't feel like doing it anymore..

Comments are much much loved.

(c) Cut to me
(c) Blood Splatter brush used in Preview image to Shira.

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~mchsflutegirl Feb 11, 2007, 1:41:00 PM
good job!!

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"i like cheesy potatoes!"
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~hakojo Feb 11, 2007, 2:06:09 PM
Wow. I like the deepness of it, and the rhymes are very well done. Great job.

BTW, where did you find the blood splatter brush? -has been looking for something similar-

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GITS-fans

Commission me!
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~KitsuneFox59 Feb 11, 2007, 2:16:20 PM
That's good that you just wrote a poem. Because otherwise you'd have to try to hide the scab for a couple of weeks (it's not easy y'know).

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after an hour of trying to find where Satan hid my boat's second pony, I gave up.
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~Ryshili Feb 12, 2007, 1:55:06 PM
She's on dA... her name's Shira I think.. x___X I'm not sure.

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"The person who is fooled is the idiot."
~Envy
"Homosexuality is God's way of insuring that the truly gifted aren't burdened with children." - Sam Austin

Planned Cons:
~Fanime '07~Anime Expo '07~Yaoi-con '07

Owner of ~EnvyWrath-Syndicate
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~DerangedSpazz Feb 12, 2007, 4:35:19 PM
:3 reed....I like it!!

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Please keep me forever where I have loaded my self...In your heart!♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥

:( Some one please love meh...
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~Ryshili Feb 13, 2007, 2:17:56 PM
There wouldn't be hiding, Jin would see it all.. not to mention she'd get depressed as hell... which is the reason why I chose to write other than do.

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"The person who is fooled is the idiot."
~Envy
"Homosexuality is God's way of insuring that the truly gifted aren't burdened with children." - Sam Austin

Planned Cons:
~Fanime '07~Anime Expo '07~Yaoi-con '07

Owner of ~EnvyWrath-Syndicate
:iconryshili:
~Ryshili Feb 13, 2007, 2:18:17 PM
w00t <3

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"The person who is fooled is the idiot."
~Envy
"Homosexuality is God's way of insuring that the truly gifted aren't burdened with children." - Sam Austin

Planned Cons:
~Fanime '07~Anime Expo '07~Yaoi-con '07

Owner of ~EnvyWrath-Syndicate
:iconderangedspazz:
~DerangedSpazz Feb 13, 2007, 2:35:25 PM
:3

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Please keep me forever where I have loaded my self...In your heart!♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥ ♥

:( Some one please love meh...
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~KitsuneFox59 Feb 13, 2007, 3:52:36 PM
Oh, I forgot about that ^^; . But yeah, good point.

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after an hour of trying to find where Satan hid my boat's second pony, I gave up.
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